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Minors (Single A)
Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 62
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Stray character in the commentary
He] constant movement can be frustrating to an opponent who's not capable of cutting off the ring on him.
Just noticed this, after the word he. Or should he be replaced by his? |
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Minors (Triple A)
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 281
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I also notice "usues" in a couple of phrases -- "usues his legs" and "usues subtle movement" to get out of trouble, or something like that.
While we're at it, there's something I've been aware of at least since 2.0 in the opening report on fighter condition: "Adams appears to be just a bit less toned than normal. Maybe his training was as rigorous as usual." I presume it actually should be "wasn't as rigorous as usual," assuming there's not any sarcasm going on here. |
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