Need a little help

[Eugene Church]

Being an old retired dj...I really liked the Nashville Kats.

Brought back memories of the Lovin' Spoonful's hit in the 60's.

You really have come along very well since you started making logos.

You do them consistently well and have occasional brilliance in your logos.

The Denver Dynamite and the Fire are really creative.

Your fonts are really something, too.

This is only a constructive suggestion and is not meant to dampen your enthusiasm and creative spirit...but I think you sometimes spoil the effect of your logos with too much in them. A few of them seem to be too busy for me.

Just my opinion...don't mean to offend.

Denver is an example of this...the dynamite seems to be misplaced...that image...plus the middle part was just a little over done for me. I probably would have liked it better with the dynamite in the middle of an explosion, rather than being placed off to the side.

Grasshoppers of Greensboro is excellent. Very creative way to state the team name.

Another suggestion...Nashville Sounds would have been better, if you had a better contrast in the color of the player...he was lost in the black...I had to look hard to figure out what it was in the center of the logo.

Keep rocking and firing, rocknfire 7.

Thanks for sharing your time and talent with us.

[rocknfire7]

Originally Posted by Eugene Church

Being an old retired dj...I really liked the Nashville Kats.

Brought back memories of the Lovin' Spoonful's hit in the 60's.

You really have come along very well since you started making logos.

You do them consistently well and have occasional brilliance in your logos.

The Denver Dynamite and the Fire are really creative.

Your fonts are really something, too.

This is only a constructive suggestion and is not meant to dampen your enthusiasm and creative spirit...but I think you sometimes spoil the effect of your logos with too much in them. A few of them seem to be too busy for me.

Just my opinion...don't mean to offend.

Denver is an example of this...the dynamite seems to be misplaced...that image...plus the middle part was just a little over done for me. I probably would have liked it better with the dynamite in the middle of an explosion, rather than being placed off to the side.

Grasshoppers of Greensboro is excellent. Very creative way to state the team name.

Another suggestion...Nashville Sounds would have been better, if you had a better contrast in the color of the player...he was lost in the black...I had to look hard to figure out what it was in the center of the logo.

Keep rocking and firing, rocknfire 7.

Thanks for sharing your time and talent with us.

Your still the nicest guy on any forum I've been on Eugene!

I'm not offended and welcome the criticism.
The logos in this thread are based on several logos that were sent to me by OTBA team and wanted something similar to what I had made for my Korean Logo set, so I am limited somewhat in what I can do with the logos,but I can do several at a time.

As for the clutter I agree. I sometimes tend to add several images or fonts that might seem unnessesary later. Oh well you learn as you go right?

I've redone the Nashville Sounds for you and hope you can see it more clearly.

Nashville Sounds version 2:

[rocknfire7]

couple more

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[Eugene Church]

Originally Posted by rocknfire7

Your still the nicest guy on any forum I've been on Eugene!

I'm not offended and welcome the criticism.
The logos in this thread are based on several logos that were sent to me by OTBA team and wanted something similar to what I had made for my Korean Logo set, so I am limited somewhat in what I can do with the logos,but I can do several at a time.

As for the clutter I agree. I sometimes tend to add several images or fonts that might seem unnessesary later. Oh well you learn as you go right?

I've redone the Nashville Sounds for you and hope you can see it more clearly.

Nashville Sounds version 2:

Now that is my kind of logo...clean...clear...good font...good color coordination...simple...uncluttered...and it should look very good in the game.

Fine job, rocknfire7.

Sorry, but I have to say it...the Xplorer logo needs some color contrast...IMO it is too dark. Use a few lighter, brighter colors.

Make the "X" yellow, so it will show off the other elements.

You told me you would not be offended.

[rocknfire7]

Eugene, I'm not offended.

You must have your monitor set to a darker setting.

Anyway here is the original I have to work with and the changes you specified

original:

[rocknfire7]

x-plorers

[rocknfire7]

remake:

[rocknfire7]

I almost feel like taking out the conquistador in the middle and using a simple font instead.
What do you think?

[rocknfire7]

Haven't forgotten about you OTBA.
I think this is the last two.
If you want any changes or modifications let me know.

[rocknfire7]

sea dogs

[OTBA Team]

Originally Posted by rocknfire7

sea dogs

Thanks alot rocknfire. My solo league thanks you.