My first attempt at uniforms in awhile

Thor · 06-01-2019, 01:55 AM

I haven't tried to make any uniforms in a long time, and I was just looking for some feedback on some uniforms I made.

Detroit Hitmen

Thor · 06-01-2019, 01:57 AM

I forgot to post the cap I made for this team for some feedback as well

Eugene Church · 06-01-2019, 12:41 PM

Thor, I can't make a very good logo, jersey or cap, but I do know when I see a good one.

You do a very nice job.. you used your colors well... and since you asked for feedback, I have two minor suggestions:

On the Detroit Away Gray Jersey, I would try to add a Black Trim to the Red Detroit Letters... it might give it a little better contrast and make it stand out more.

Or reverse the colors... make the Detroit Letters Black and the trim in Red.

On the Hitmen Home White with Stripes... I would make the stripes more subtle with a lighter shade for the stripes, so they would not compete with the letters Hitmen... I think the nickname gets lost in the stripes.

Just my opinion.

BleedBlue · 06-01-2019, 01:13 PM

Really like the style and colors you used. The crosshair is a very nice, subtle touch as well.

tklem321 · 06-01-2019, 04:55 PM

I think these are really nice. The piping might be distracting a bit from the wordmarks though.

Thor · 06-02-2019, 04:48 AM

Thanks for the input everyone. I will keep working on these and try the suggestions you all gave.

Thor · 06-02-2019, 05:12 AM

So here are the away jerseys with some of the suggested changes. I really do like the change that you suggested about the black trim around the letters Eugene Church. I think those came out great!

Thor · 06-02-2019, 05:20 AM

Now for the changes to the home jerseys. I lightened up the pinstripes as best I could, and removed the piping on some, and even changed the piping color on one.

Thor · 06-02-2019, 05:30 AM

Here are the caps with a slight change thanks again to Eugene Church's great suggestion about the trim around the lettering. I didn't notice at first that the color was off on the hat font either so I also fixed that.

06-01-2019, 01:55 AM	#1
Thor Minors (Single A) Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Illinois Posts: 73	My first attempt at uniforms in awhile I haven't tried to make any uniforms in a long time, and I was just looking for some feedback on some uniforms I made. Detroit Hitmen Attached Images

06-01-2019, 01:57 AM	#2
Thor Minors (Single A) Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Illinois Posts: 73	I forgot to post the cap I made for this team for some feedback as well Attached Images

06-01-2019, 12:41 PM	#3
Eugene Church Hall Of Famer Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 35,092 Blog Entries: 1	Thor, I can't make a very good logo, jersey or cap, but I do know when I see a good one. You do a very nice job.. you used your colors well... and since you asked for feedback, I have two minor suggestions: On the Detroit Away Gray Jersey, I would try to add a Black Trim to the Red Detroit Letters... it might give it a little better contrast and make it stand out more. Or reverse the colors... make the Detroit Letters Black and the trim in Red. On the Hitmen Home White with Stripes... I would make the stripes more subtle with a lighter shade for the stripes, so they would not compete with the letters Hitmen... I think the nickname gets lost in the stripes. Just my opinion. Last edited by Eugene Church; 06-01-2019 at 12:42 PM.

06-02-2019, 05:12 AM	#7
Thor Minors (Single A) Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Illinois Posts: 73	So here are the away jerseys with some of the suggested changes. I really do like the change that you suggested about the black trim around the letters Eugene Church. I think those came out great! Attached Images

06-02-2019, 05:20 AM	#8
Thor Minors (Single A) Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Illinois Posts: 73	Now for the changes to the home jerseys. I lightened up the pinstripes as best I could, and removed the piping on some, and even changed the piping color on one. Attached Images

06-01-2019, 01:13 PM	#4
BleedBlue Minors (Single A) Join Date: Apr 2015 Posts: 72	Really like the style and colors you used. The crosshair is a very nice, subtle touch as well.

06-01-2019, 04:55 PM	#5
tklem321 Minors (Triple A) Join Date: Apr 2017 Posts: 246	I think these are really nice. The piping might be distracting a bit from the wordmarks though.

06-02-2019, 04:48 AM	#6
Thor Minors (Single A) Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Illinois Posts: 73	Thanks for the input everyone. I will keep working on these and try the suggestions you all gave.

06-02-2019, 05:30 AM	#9
Thor Minors (Single A) Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Illinois Posts: 73	Here are the caps with a slight change thanks again to Eugene Church's great suggestion about the trim around the lettering. I didn't notice at first that the color was off on the hat font either so I also fixed that. Attached Images Last edited by Thor; 06-02-2019 at 05:35 AM.