Just a Test Logo - Page 2

pepeda · 05-20-2006, 04:55 PM

Here is another one:

regards Pepe

StorminZ · 05-20-2006, 05:28 PM

Like the colours of the Texas logo ... I can see you're havin' fun with the toy!!!!!

BTW, and I'm not familiar with AI, but I know CorelDraw is similar, but CD can be had at academic pricing for about $100 US, an excellent deal considering you also get CorelPhotopaint, the Corel-counterpart to Adobe Photoshop.

In the meantime, I'll keep enjoying your work ... keep at it, Pepeda!

Cuss · 05-20-2006, 06:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pepeda

Thx Cuss,

i guess its hard in the start, but i will try to improve. When i see your work, i actually feel like a little boy, your work is more than amazing. On the other side your work is a great guidline to work with. Maybe you could send me your artwork as eps file so i can look at your technic. But if you don´t want to give away your work i will also understand it. Thx for the help

Hi Deft,

thx for the suggestion,
i will give it a try. I think the Text Layout is one of the trickier Part of the Logo Design , (my opinion). I will have to learn a lot till they look as good as other ones.

Thats why i like this Forum, great Feedback from all and pointers to improve the work. I like it

Thx Guys keep up the good job here.

regards Pepe

sorry pepeda, I am not trying to be mean or anything but one should never give away their source file because it is the only thing that proves their creative right and ownership to the piece.

pepeda · 05-20-2006, 06:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cuss

sorry pepeda, I am not trying to be mean or anything but one should never give away their source file because it is the only thing that proves their creative right and ownership to the piece.

Ok Cuss, i truly understand it. But if i have some question i will ask you

regards Pepe

pepeda · 05-25-2006, 03:15 PM

Hi,

made a Dodgers Logo. Maybe someone can use it. C&C are welcome.

regards Pepe

knuckler · 05-25-2006, 07:14 PM

It's an excellent logo Pepe. It might help to make LA and Dodgers pop a bit more though. Maybe a bolder white outline?

ukhotstove · 05-25-2006, 07:58 PM

All very nice specially the Dodgers one.

Jestor · 05-26-2006, 07:45 PM

One small critique I do have for you pepe, is that some of your logos could use some more contrast. I think the Texas Rangers logo is more along the lines of what you should be shooting for in terms of contrast until you have more experience with the nuances and particular subtleties of it.

Another example: The Hawks lettering in the first logo stands out much more than in the second logo, because of the white outline constrasting beautifully with the dark brown letters and beige background of the box.

pepeda · 05-26-2006, 08:43 PM

Thx Jestor and Knuckler for the advice with the bolder Lines

So i made a smaller revision on it, maybe its better now. Critic and comments are welcome.

regards Pepe

knuckler · 05-27-2006, 12:37 PM

It looks a lot better Pepe, and it looked good before. I miss the stars though which were outstanding.

Jestor · 05-29-2006, 01:09 AM

Immensely improved, pepe.

pepeda · 05-30-2006, 06:45 PM

Hi Guys,

since this is a thread for the first Drawn Logo here comes another one. Its for a Buddy in the CLB ( BTW. we have one Spot open in the League just check it out, a great League

) His Team is called Microsoft Bugs. Since i had a "Normal" Bug in the Start for his Logo i have done this.Its first Drawn with a pencil and than scanned to the computer. Than reworked on Illustrator. Critic and Comments are more than welcome.

I´m looking for ideas what i could do to make it more look like a real Sport Logo( i mean to use it like a mascot like other teams do). If anyone has an idea let me know

regards Pepe

Cooleyvol · 05-30-2006, 07:23 PM

make the bug hold a bat.

knuckler · 05-30-2006, 07:26 PM

I personally like it as is Pepe. The writing stangs out well, particuarly where the Bugs is written. If you wanted it more like other logos, maybe make it a bit more cartoonish and place a cap on his head? Or have a bug swinging a bat?

BTW, did you see EC's thread about needing a logo for his Professional Baseball Alliance? I think you could make him a great original logo if you were looking for more stuff to do in illustrator.

pepeda · 05-30-2006, 09:09 PM

Thx for the ideas, i will look if i can work something out

regards Pepe

Cuss · 05-31-2006, 12:03 AM

Another nice one pepeda, here are a couple of things I would do:

First, make the semi-tranparent back drop shape into fully visible. I am not saying that it doesn't look good, but real life teams would never do something like that because it is a drag to print something semi-tranparent.

Next, I would change the colour of that backdrop shape to something that will either contrast or complement that main dark brown colour. I recommend you getting a colour wheel to help with deciding what colurs to use with certain colours. There are also numerous website that have the same type of information.

Again, these are only my 2-cent and they are probably worth even less that that.

Good luck!

05-20-2006, 04:55 PM	#21
pepeda Major Leagues Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 389	Here is another one: regards Pepe Attached Images __________________ GBL Montreal Expos CLB Sony Raiders Last edited by pepeda; 05-20-2006 at 04:57 PM.

05-25-2006, 03:15 PM	#25
pepeda Major Leagues Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 389	Hi, made a Dodgers Logo. Maybe someone can use it. C&C are welcome. regards Pepe Attached Images __________________ GBL Montreal Expos CLB Sony Raiders

05-25-2006, 07:58 PM	#27
ukhotstove Hall Of Famer Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: North of England Gods Country Posts: 7,175	All very nice specially the Dodgers one. __________________ Detroit Diesel Dynasty San Antonio Calzones of Laredo Dynasty

05-26-2006, 08:43 PM	#29
pepeda Major Leagues Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 389	Thx Jestor and Knuckler for the advice with the bolder Lines So i made a smaller revision on it, maybe its better now. Critic and comments are welcome. regards Pepe Attached Images __________________ GBL Montreal Expos CLB Sony Raiders

05-30-2006, 06:45 PM	#32
pepeda Major Leagues Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 389	Hi Guys, since this is a thread for the first Drawn Logo here comes another one. Its for a Buddy in the CLB ( BTW. we have one Spot open in the League just check it out, a great League ) His Team is called Microsoft Bugs. Since i had a "Normal" Bug in the Start for his Logo i have done this.Its first Drawn with a pencil and than scanned to the computer. Than reworked on Illustrator. Critic and Comments are more than welcome. I´m looking for ideas what i could do to make it more look like a real Sport Logo( i mean to use it like a mascot like other teams do). If anyone has an idea let me know regards Pepe Attached Images __________________ GBL Montreal Expos CLB Sony Raiders

05-20-2006, 05:28 PM	#22
StorminZ Major Leagues Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Edmonton, AB Posts: 403	Like the colours of the Texas logo ... I can see you're havin' fun with the toy!!!!! BTW, and I'm not familiar with AI, but I know CorelDraw is similar, but CD can be had at academic pricing for about $100 US, an excellent deal considering you also get CorelPhotopaint, the Corel-counterpart to Adobe Photoshop. In the meantime, I'll keep enjoying your work ... keep at it, Pepeda!

05-25-2006, 07:14 PM	#26
knuckler Hall Of Famer Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,347	It's an excellent logo Pepe. It might help to make LA and Dodgers pop a bit more though. Maybe a bolder white outline?

05-27-2006, 12:37 PM	#30
knuckler Hall Of Famer Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,347	It looks a lot better Pepe, and it looked good before. I miss the stars though which were outstanding.

05-30-2006, 07:23 PM	#33
Cooleyvol Hall Of Famer Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Union City, TN Posts: 6,383	make the bug hold a bat.

05-30-2006, 07:26 PM	#34
knuckler Hall Of Famer Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,347	I personally like it as is Pepe. The writing stangs out well, particuarly where the Bugs is written. If you wanted it more like other logos, maybe make it a bit more cartoonish and place a cap on his head? Or have a bug swinging a bat? BTW, did you see EC's thread about needing a logo for his Professional Baseball Alliance? I think you could make him a great original logo if you were looking for more stuff to do in illustrator.

05-30-2006, 09:09 PM	#35
pepeda Major Leagues Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 389	Thx for the ideas, i will look if i can work something out regards Pepe __________________ GBL Montreal Expos CLB Sony Raiders

05-31-2006, 12:03 AM	#36
Cuss Major Leagues Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: BC Canada Posts: 464	Another nice one pepeda, here are a couple of things I would do: First, make the semi-tranparent back drop shape into fully visible. I am not saying that it doesn't look good, but real life teams would never do something like that because it is a drag to print something semi-tranparent. Next, I would change the colour of that backdrop shape to something that will either contrast or complement that main dark brown colour. I recommend you getting a colour wheel to help with deciding what colurs to use with certain colours. There are also numerous website that have the same type of information. Again, these are only my 2-cent and they are probably worth even less that that. Good luck! __________________