Here's a logo i just made...

Cuss16 · 06-23-2003, 11:15 PM

Not a request or anything just something i suddenly had an idea for. Designed the entire thing from scratch again so welcome to use it anywhere you want. Let me know what you guys think.

Paul

Cuss16 · 06-23-2003, 11:19 PM

here's the bmp with black transparency. since the logo i designed was too wide, I took out the letters for the in game version. Enjoy!!

Cuss16 · 06-23-2003, 11:21 PM

here's one in game bmp. with white background.

Cuss16 · 06-23-2003, 11:53 PM

Just want remind everyone world cup baseball entry closes in 5 Days!!

Eugene Church · 06-24-2003, 12:22 AM

Cuss16,

You are really remarkable, skilled and very creative in logo designing.

So don't let my opinion hurt your feelings...it is meant only to offer an observation and an evalution of this logo, which you requested.

I like logos that are not cluttered and busy.

This one is done beautifully with great graphic skills and creativity...but it's hard for me see what it is.

I think your designs get too complicated.

I wish you wouldn't cover up part of the lettering.

Let the entire nickname be visible.

Take my opinion with a grain of salt. I'm not the MTV generation.
I'm old-fashioned, traditional... and old, too.

I hope you will still do my logo project as this critique is meant only to give you some feedback to perhaps improve your work.

To improve one needs to have criticism, hopefully from someone who knows what he is talking about...which may not be true in my case. I was a country disc jockey for 32 years and and getting negative critiques hurt...but in general, the negative ones are what make me a better announcer.

I know a good logo when I see one...and a good one is one that is done the way I like them. Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder.

But I can still see your great skill even when I may not be fond of that particular design.

Cuss16 · 06-24-2003, 12:30 AM

I know what you are saying, don't worry about it, i ask for opinions therefore i want opinions. It's comment like these that will help me get better along the way. And of course i'll do your set the way you want them. I always do it the way others want them. So dont worry about giving me a truthful comment. I can, and will adjust to any comments that people may throw at me. I remember just a couple of months ago, i was critisized for making my logos too 3D like the "XFL" and now i rarely do any 3D ones and my designs are actually improving. (Thanx "Portlander"

) And thanx for your truthful suggestions, I'll work on that.

zyk · 06-24-2003, 01:42 AM

i think the first one you posted is AWSOME... =)

to be honest the in game ones you made without text just looses the look i liked on the first one...

could you make a in game version of it with the lettering still there on a white background?

i had designed one for stealth in my logo set which i made for my solo league.. this beats it hands down, no contest.... i would like to replace that teams logo with this!!

Wilt · 06-24-2003, 11:45 AM

I am sure the logo is good. I just don't know what it is

Also, I clicked your World Cup link but did not see much info. I saw no sign-up info. What is it?

Cuss16 · 06-24-2003, 12:36 PM

Yeah i think the logo is kinda messy too, i will try to avoid that in the future.

and the world cup info is in the dynasty thread and the online league thread. also the front page of my world cup site. You gott click on the logo.

Sometime you might have to hold control and click refresh for the page to load properly. ONLY 4 DAYS LEFT TO SIGN UP!!

Cuss16 · 06-24-2003, 12:58 PM

And by the way wilt, the logo is suppose to be a rat in the shadows, hence the name, stealth.

I know it's not clear enough though. Anyways here are the links to more details about the tournament.
http://www.400softwarestudios.com/bo...253#post345253
http://www.400softwarestudios.com/bo...245#post345245

Crapshoot · 06-24-2003, 02:09 PM

cuss, I don't venture here much, but that is a sweet looking logo- it seems alive, almost. Good job.

HackySax · 06-24-2003, 03:56 PM

I think it looks great. It is not clear that it is a rat, not to me anyways, but I like the dark overtones to the logo!

06-23-2003, 11:15 PM	#1
Cuss16 Hall Of Famer Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: BC, CANADA Posts: 2,994	Here's a logo i just made... Not a request or anything just something i suddenly had an idea for. Designed the entire thing from scratch again so welcome to use it anywhere you want. Let me know what you guys think. Paul Attached Images __________________

06-23-2003, 11:19 PM	#2
Cuss16 Hall Of Famer Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: BC, CANADA Posts: 2,994	here's the bmp with black transparency. since the logo i designed was too wide, I took out the letters for the in game version. Enjoy!! Attached Images __________________

06-23-2003, 11:21 PM	#3
Cuss16 Hall Of Famer Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: BC, CANADA Posts: 2,994	here's one in game bmp. with white background. Attached Images __________________

06-23-2003, 11:53 PM	#4
Cuss16 Hall Of Famer Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: BC, CANADA Posts: 2,994	Just want remind everyone world cup baseball entry closes in 5 Days!! __________________

06-24-2003, 12:30 AM	#6
Cuss16 Hall Of Famer Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: BC, CANADA Posts: 2,994	I know what you are saying, don't worry about it, i ask for opinions therefore i want opinions. It's comment like these that will help me get better along the way. And of course i'll do your set the way you want them. I always do it the way others want them. So dont worry about giving me a truthful comment. I can, and will adjust to any comments that people may throw at me. I remember just a couple of months ago, i was critisized for making my logos too 3D like the "XFL" and now i rarely do any 3D ones and my designs are actually improving. (Thanx "Portlander" ) And thanx for your truthful suggestions, I'll work on that. __________________ Last edited by Cuss16; 06-24-2003 at 12:33 AM.

06-24-2003, 12:22 AM	#5
Eugene Church Hall Of Famer Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 36,205	Cuss16, You are really remarkable, skilled and very creative in logo designing. So don't let my opinion hurt your feelings...it is meant only to offer an observation and an evalution of this logo, which you requested. I like logos that are not cluttered and busy. This one is done beautifully with great graphic skills and creativity...but it's hard for me see what it is. I think your designs get too complicated. I wish you wouldn't cover up part of the lettering. Let the entire nickname be visible. Take my opinion with a grain of salt. I'm not the MTV generation. I'm old-fashioned, traditional... and old, too. I hope you will still do my logo project as this critique is meant only to give you some feedback to perhaps improve your work. To improve one needs to have criticism, hopefully from someone who knows what he is talking about...which may not be true in my case. I was a country disc jockey for 32 years and and getting negative critiques hurt...but in general, the negative ones are what make me a better announcer. I know a good logo when I see one...and a good one is one that is done the way I like them. Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. But I can still see your great skill even when I may not be fond of that particular design.

06-24-2003, 01:42 AM	#7
zyk Minors (Double A) Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: vegas Posts: 177	i think the first one you posted is AWSOME... =) to be honest the in game ones you made without text just looses the look i liked on the first one... could you make a in game version of it with the lettering still there on a white background? i had designed one for stealth in my logo set which i made for my solo league.. this beats it hands down, no contest.... i would like to replace that teams logo with this!! Last edited by zyk; 06-24-2003 at 01:45 AM.

06-24-2003, 11:45 AM	#8
Wilt Minors (Double A) Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: in the paint Posts: 179	I am sure the logo is good. I just don't know what it is Also, I clicked your World Cup link but did not see much info. I saw no sign-up info. What is it? __________________ Blank until I can find my tripping penguin again!

06-24-2003, 12:36 PM	#9
Cuss16 Hall Of Famer Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: BC, CANADA Posts: 2,994	Yeah i think the logo is kinda messy too, i will try to avoid that in the future. and the world cup info is in the dynasty thread and the online league thread. also the front page of my world cup site. You gott click on the logo. Sometime you might have to hold control and click refresh for the page to load properly. ONLY 4 DAYS LEFT TO SIGN UP!! __________________

06-24-2003, 12:58 PM	#10
Cuss16 Hall Of Famer Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: BC, CANADA Posts: 2,994	And by the way wilt, the logo is suppose to be a rat in the shadows, hence the name, stealth. I know it's not clear enough though. Anyways here are the links to more details about the tournament. http://www.400softwarestudios.com/bo...253#post345253 http://www.400softwarestudios.com/bo...245#post345245 __________________

06-24-2003, 02:09 PM	#11
Crapshoot Hall Of Famer Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: watching: DArwin's missing link in action Posts: 3,112	cuss, I don't venture here much, but that is a sweet looking logo- it seems alive, almost. Good job. __________________ Senior Senor Member of the OOTP Boards Pittsburgh Playmates- OTBL

06-24-2003, 03:56 PM	#12
HackySax Minors (Rookie Ball) Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 20	I think it looks great. It is not clear that it is a rat, not to me anyways, but I like the dark overtones to the logo! __________________ ~HackySax --- There is life after baseball, it just isnt as fulfilling!