Suspension News Item Fixes

Zeke K · 12-23-2020, 09:48 PM

I looked through and found the section that contains the error. I rounded out the text, but of course you can look up and correct the section however you'd like... just trying to help out.

The issue was that the item read as if the player had checked the incident himself and there was no suspension. As if the one doing the checking was the player and not the league.

Example: <OBJ id="9245" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has reviewed the incident in last night's game but no suspension was given."/>

Changes:

<CAT id="622">
<OBJ id="9192" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been checked for an incident in last night's game but no suspension was given."/>
<OBJ id="9245" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been reviewed following the incident in last night's game but no suspension was given."/>
<OBJ id="9246" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been gone over following the incident in last night's game but no suspension was given."/>
<OBJ id="9247" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been gone over following the incident in last night's game but no suspension was warranted."/>
<OBJ id="9248" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been checked for an incident in last night's game but no suspension was warranted."/>
<OBJ id="9249" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been reviewed due to the incident in last night's game but no suspension was warranted."/>
<OBJ id="9250" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been gone over following the incident in last night's game but no additional punishment was given."/>
<OBJ id="9251" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been checked for an incident in last night's game but no additional punishment was given."/>
<OBJ id="9252" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been reviewed following the incident in last night's game but no additional punishment was given."/>
<OBJ id="9253" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been checked for an incident in last night's game but no additional punishment was given."/>
</CAT>

JeffR · 12-23-2020, 10:06 PM

Yeah, that's not great grammar. Should probably be referring to his actions, rather than the player himself. I'll change it.

12-23-2020, 09:48 PM	#1
Zeke K Minors (Double A) Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 153	Suspension News Item Fixes I looked through and found the section that contains the error. I rounded out the text, but of course you can look up and correct the section however you'd like... just trying to help out. The issue was that the item read as if the player had checked the incident himself and there was no suspension. As if the one doing the checking was the player and not the league. Example: <OBJ id="9245" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has reviewed the incident in last night's game but no suspension was given."/> Changes: <CAT id="622"> <OBJ id="9192" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been checked for an incident in last night's game but no suspension was given."/> <OBJ id="9245" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been reviewed following the incident in last night's game but no suspension was given."/> <OBJ id="9246" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been gone over following the incident in last night's game but no suspension was given."/> <OBJ id="9247" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been gone over following the incident in last night's game but no suspension was warranted."/> <OBJ id="9248" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been checked for an incident in last night's game but no suspension was warranted."/> <OBJ id="9249" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been reviewed due to the incident in last night's game but no suspension was warranted."/> <OBJ id="9250" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been gone over following the incident in last night's game but no additional punishment was given."/> <OBJ id="9251" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been checked for an incident in last night's game but no additional punishment was given."/> <OBJ id="9252" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been reviewed following the incident in last night's game but no additional punishment was given."/> <OBJ id="9253" text="The [%leagueabbr] has announced that [%teamlink nick] [%playerposition] [%personlink] has been checked for an incident in last night's game but no additional punishment was given."/> </CAT>

12-23-2020, 10:06 PM	#2
JeffR FHM Producer Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Kelowna, BC Posts: 17,425	Yeah, that's not great grammar. Should probably be referring to his actions, rather than the player himself. I'll change it.