Hawaii Island Warriors Logo

[WWBL Commissioner]

Hello all,
I am looking for a logo for the Hawaii Island Warriors. I like the colors of the university of Hawaii, Black and Hunter Green, butother than that I have no ideas. If anybody would like to take a swing at this one it would be great...thanks

[Eugene Church]

knuckler did this one.

It might give someone an idea.

[WWBL Commissioner]

That's nice with hte head dress and all, I'm looking for the green and black color set up but other than that I can't wait to see what people might come up with...any takers?

Thanks

[WWBL Commissioner]

Just a little bump, hoping somebody out there is willing to take this logo on

Thanks

[giornaliere]

I just started cleaning up the tiki face (it would end up in the shape of a rectangle), but I'll gladly finish it if this is something you like.

-j

[rocknfire7]

Here is another take

[WWBL Commissioner]

Originally Posted by giornaliere

I just started cleaning up the tiki face (it would end up in the shape of a rectangle), but I'll gladly finish it if this is something you like.

-j

This would be perfect, yeah if you want to work on it some more go right ahead, thanks for the effort

[WWBL Commissioner]

Originally Posted by rocknfire7

Here is another take

Can Islanders be changed to Island Warriors?

Thanks for the efforts

[giornaliere]

Cleaned up!

[rocknfire7]

Originally Posted by WWBL Commissioner

Can Islanders be changed to Island Warriors?

Thanks for the efforts

I'll be gone tomorrow.
My sisters are playing in State (softball) it's in Topeka(3 hour drive), and it's their senior year so I will work on it Sunday/Monday.

[Eugene Church]

Originally Posted by rocknfire7

Here is another take

You do nice work, but you need to watch the color contrasts a little more.

Don't mean to offend, this is just my opinion, you need to use a few lighter colors so there will be better contrast with the darker ones.

For instance in the Hawaii logo, try to make the team name and nickname in white or light yellow for contrast. It is hard to read in black.

Notice how knuckler used colors on his logo posted in Post #2.

It is very easy to read because it has good contrast between the dark and light colors.

[rocknfire7]

Originally Posted by WWBL Commissioner

Can Islanders be changed to Island Warriors?

Thanks for the efforts

I'll have to completely redo the logo. I almost always save the photoshop file but in this case I accidently deleted it.

I have a few questions about your request though:

Do you want the logo to read Hawaii Island Warriors
Or Hawaiian Islands Warriors

If the color or contrast are not OK let me know too.

[rocknfire7]

Originally Posted by Eugene Church

You do nice work, but you need to watch the color contrasts a little more.

Don't mean to offend, this is just my opinion, you need to use a few lighter colors so there will be better contrast with the darker ones.

For instance in the Hawaii logo, try to make the team name and nickname in white or light yellow for contrast. It is hard to read in black.

Notice how knuckler used colors on his logo posted in Post #2.

It is very easy to read because it has good contrast between the dark and light colors.

I'm trying Eugene, believe me. I also have trouble matching my clothes sometimes and have to ask my wife : "Does this shirt go with my Dockers honey?" I think I will run anything I do by you first so the colors are right and match. How about a white stroke around the black font, will that work?

[rocknfire7]

Originally Posted by rocknfire7

I'll be gone tomorrow.
My sisters are playing in State (softball) it's in Topeka(3 hour drive), and it's their senior year so I will work on it Sunday/Monday.

Just a follow up if anybody cares:

They won the Kansas 5A State Championship by a score of 1-0.
A nailbiter to the end. The game that led up to the championship game went 10 innings and ended up 2-1. My sisters played 3b and 1b. and yes I am very proud of them.

[rocknfire7]

Originally Posted by WWBL Commissioner

Can Islanders be changed to Island Warriors?

Thanks for the efforts

Here is a better effort. ( I hope...)

[Eugene Church]

Originally Posted by rocknfire7

Just a follow up if anybody cares:

They won the Kansas 5A State Championship by a score of 1-0.
A nailbiter to the end. The game that led up to the championship game went 10 innings and ended up 2-1. My sisters played 3b and 1b. and yes I am very proud of them.

Congrats to your sisters.

Great accomplishment.

[Eugene Church]

Originally Posted by rocknfire7

Here is a better effort. ( I hope...)

Hope you don't mind my comments.

I can't make logos, but I usually know a good one when I see it.

These are very good...the white lettering really stands out now.

IMO it is far, far better.

But it is not my request thread.

It is Commish that has to like it.

[knuckler]

Originally Posted by Eugene Church

Hope you don't mind my comments.

I can't make logos, but I usually know a good one when I see it.

Can't speak for rnf, but I appreciate the feedback. You have a good eye for what does and doesn't work in the game. I feel bad giving it sometimes though(like with pepe's logos), and have to remind myself that it helps.

[Eugene Church]

Originally Posted by knuckler

Can't speak for rnf, but I appreciate the feedback. You have a good eye for what does and doesn't work in the game. I feel bad giving it sometimes though(like with pepe's logos), and have to remind myself that it helps.

Most of the good logo designers like the feedback...especially you and Pepe.

I think rocknfire7 is a lot like both of you...in temperament...and he is putting out some good logos, too.

He is very creative...just has to work on his colors and color contrasts.

You and Pepe are two of the best logo designers we have...and we have had a bunch of them in the last 3 years.

But you and he have stayed...and gotten better.

Keep up the great work.

[rocknfire7]

Originally Posted by knuckler

Can't speak for rnf, but I appreciate the feedback. You have a good eye for what does and doesn't work in the game. I feel bad giving it sometimes though(like with pepe's logos), and have to remind myself that it helps.

I do appreciate the comments and like I have said a million times I don't have a lot of time to do them. Especially around baseball season. With the holiday I had more time and got a few out and even made a recomendation to silvam14 on a Las Vegas Outlaws Logo. I will be back in full force around September until April or so.

I know I am not in the same league as Pepe, Knuckler and company but a lot of what I do right now is from PM's asking for my style of logo.

See the Pilotman thread

I also did several logos of that style for an on-line Mexican League.