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Old 03-05-2003, 03:59 PM   #4
A.J. Holz
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Cool, a pedant thread.

Here are some that I found in the news headlines. Recommended fixes are in parentheses. More to follow.

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Clyde Bushnell fires NO-NO against Montreal

MONTREAL - Montreal's bats were sleeping. And Philadelphia's
Clyde Bushnell gave them no chance at all to wake up.

(should be "Montreal's bats were sleeping, and Philadelphia's Clyde...." etc.)

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George White out for full season

NEW YORK (A) - New York (A)'s third baseman George
White suffered a season ending injury when he was
struck by a pitch from Seattle's Josh
Constantino. He collapsed in pain and was helped
off the field. Broken Wrist was the diagnosis after
x-rays were taken in a near by hospital. The message
shocked team mates and team officials. This year White
drove in 24 and scored 15 runs while batting .297 with
10 longballs. He's 8th in the American League in RBIs
and 3rd in homeruns!

('near by' should be 'nearby', and 'team mates' should be 'teammates')

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Orestes Torres quiets Seattle bats with shutout

NEW YORK (A) - It was a great day for New York (A)'s
right-hander Orestes Torres.
The 26-year old recorded his first career shutout,
a 2-hitter, against Seattle on Saturday. 'Hey, that's
my job! Everytime I take the mound I give the best
I can. And my best stuff was too much for them today.'
Torres (3-2) struck out 7 and walked 2, throwing 68
of 113 pitches for strikes. The hitting star for New
York (A) was shortstop Kenneth Lundeen,
he finished 1 for 3, hitting a homerun, with 3 RBI.
New York (A) improved it's record to 14-16, scoring
6 runs on 4 hits.

('it's' in the last sentence should be 'its')

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Josh Constantino blanks Baltimore with a 2-hitter

BALTIMORE - Baltimore's hitter were dominated by Seattle's
Josh Constantino. He gave up
just 2 hits in recording his 2nd shutout of the season.

('hitter' should be 'hitters')
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