13635
"grounder to second...(nl)has it..."
Who has it?
13636
"step on second for one..."
Should be "steps on second"
13646
"hard grounder to [%game secondbase]...(nl)fields it cleanly..."
Should be "he fields it"
13650
"he fields it on a one hop.."
Drop "a" or "one"
13652
11712
"[%game batter] hits it on the right on the nose right up the middle.."
Should be "hits it right on the nose up the middle" or "hits it on the nose right up the middle" or simply "hits it up the middle".
13664
"and wings it to first is in plenty of time to double up "
Drop "is"
13666
"routine groundball up the middle...(nl)[%game secondbase] makes the play near the bag for one...(nl)and over to first for the easy double play"
He should probably step on second base.
11692
"to finish off twin killing!""
Should be "to finish off the twin"
11696
11697
"tapped to second...(nl)[%game shortstop] covers, tags the bag...(nl)OUT!(nl)on to first"
This category is shortstops making 6-3 double plays. Shouldn't be anything about covering a base.
11700
11705
11706
11712
"and make a quick throw to first "
Should be "and makes a quick"
11701
"and get it to first in plenty of time"
Should be "and gets it to first"
11707
"and makes the quick toss to [%game batter] for out number two"
Should be [firstbase] instead of [batter]
11711
"big hopper by [%game pitcher] back up the middle.."
"step on second..."
"and whips it to first is in plenty of time "
First: Should be [batter] instead of [pitcher]
Second: Should be "steps on second"
Third: Drop "is"
11713
"easy twin kill for [%game fielder]..."
Most of these are saying [shortstop]
11715
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Not finished... the announcer got bored.
11716
TEXT_OBJECT id="11716" text="second for one...(nl)and the soft toss to [%game firstbase] arrives in time!(nl)textbook double play...(nl)nice double play by [%game secondbase]...(nl)[%game outs+2 long] down."/>
It was never begun.
Obviously these go together.
They give credit for the great DP to the 2nd baseman.
11717
"hit by [%game pitcher] straight up the middle...(nl)[%game shortstop] hustles over near the second base.."
Should be hit by [batter] instead of [pitcher]
Also: Should drop "the" in front of "second base"
13289
"aglance from the pitcher keeps"
2 words, A glance
716
"[%personlink] scoured [%leaguename] for hot prospects,"
This category is about scouting the amateur draft.
749
"[%personlink L] the players listed below are "
Should be "[personlink] thinks the"
757
"and began banging out the scout report "
Should be "scouting report"
788
"He unearthed a [%personage]-year-old [%personlink#1] "
This looks to say "unearthed a 19 year old Jack Bob". This would be opposed to the unearthing of the other 19 year old Jack Bobs found last week.
Should have [position] between those 2 references to make it work right.
789
"The jury might still be out on that subject, though [%personlink#2 L] is definitely worth watching"
[personlink#2] has been referring to the scout... no reason to watch him I don't think.
1000
"[%string#1] Yields Fruit upon [%personname#2 l] Return"
Should be possessive, "upon [scout]'s return"
568
569
573
583
594
599
"[%personname#2 F L] Zeroes in on [%playerposition capital]"
It doesn't show who he scouted. That may make a difference whether you jump to it right away or don't care for a couple days. Besides, "zeroes in on centerfielder" just doesn't make sense.
528
"His observations, along with hyperlinks to each player profile, can be accessed belown:"
Spelling, below
531
"will help us gameplan against them "
Game plan should be 2 words I believe
550
"Please take a few moments to go over this assessment and see how best it can be used to beat the "
Should be "see how it can best be used to beat"
721
"What are the strengths of weaknesses of [%teamlink nick]? "
Should be "what are the strengths and weaknesses" or "strengths or weaknesses"
498
"[%personname l] Visits [%teamname]; Compile Team Dossier"
Should be "compiles"
504
"[%personname l] Files Confidential Report"
Should mention what team he scouted.