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Old 06-08-2006, 12:04 AM   #105
tysok
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"record in [%pitching ra] appearances capped"
Calls for RA but only says appearances.

3184
"he suffered [%pitching bs word] for a [pitching bsp] blown save percentage."
This is a Rookie of the year mention, shouldn't they focus on save percentage instead of the negative blown save percentage?

3191
"innings with [%pitching ha] allowed, rung up "
Should be "[ha] hits allowed"

3193
"for [%pitching ha] basehits"
"waved him in from the bullpen on [%pitching svo] occasions and he responded with [%pitching s word] "
First: 2 words, base hits
Second: Talking about RA but calls for save opps

1829
"[%personname L] of [%teamname] Annointed "
Spelling, anointed

2167
"record, a [%pitching era], and [%pitching k word]."
No reference to what [era] is.

4435
"clubs only managed paltry [%pitching avg] when [%personlink L] was on the mound."
No reference to what [avg] is.

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(1986)"[%teamname]\'s [%personname L] Puts up Great Rookie of Year Numbers in [%subleagueabbr]"
(1991)"[%teamname] Starter [%personname F L] Racks In [%subleagueabbr] Rookie of the Year Award"
There's a slew of these. It looks like there were 2 test groups, one called it "Rookie of Year" and the other called it "Rookie of the Year" and in these cases it didn't get moved to a variable. Some of these appear to be fine the way they are, but since they matched exactly with my assumed "test subjects" I included them anyhow. Basically, at least some need to be changed to a variable.

1997
"Rookie of the Year Champ Crowned in [%subleagueabbr], [%teamname] Starter [%personname L] SION Choice"
Should be "SION's Choice"

6145
"heakes it on one hop"
Should be "He takes it"

6154
"it is quickly picked up by the [%game pitcher]..."
Should drop "the" in front of [pitcher]

6165
"and make the easy "
Should be "and makes the easy"

6177
"and tosses it to [%game firstbase] at first to get the [%game outs+1 order long]."
Should have "out" at the end. This just looks to say "to get the second."

6183
"then tosses it first for the "
Should be "then tosses it to first"

6206
"[%game pitcher] has it...(nl)he set...(nl)throws to first..."
Should be "he sets"

6211
"hit to right of the mound..."
Should be "hit to the right"

6232
"[%game batter] sends one back back to the mound..."
One one too many back back's.

6255
"easy bouncer to the left side...(nl)[%game pitcher] makes the play...(nl)and underhands it to [%game firstbase].."
The pitcher won't be underhanding it to 1st if it's hit to the left side.

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6629
"for the [%game outs+1 order long] of the [%game inning order long] inning."
Should have "out" after [outs]. This looks to say "the second of the second inning"

5888
"[%game batter] is retired for out for number [%game outs+1 long]."
Drop the second "for"

6560
6626
"turns and make a quick lob to"
Should be "turns and makes a quick"

6564
"gloves it on the third hop away from the bag..."
Inches and feet are hard enough, let's not measure in hops too. Looks like "away from the bag" should just be dropped.

6586
"nubbed back toward the right side..."
Just where is this pitcher standing? Should just be "nubbed toward the right side"

6590
"[%game batter] tries to check his swing...(nl)hits a bouncer to first ...(nl)[%game secondbase] gloves it on the edge of the grass..."
Everything else in this category is being fielded by the first baseman.

6610
6631
"rapped back to the first baseman..."
"first base to the pitcher...(nl)[%game outs+1 long] away, [%game inning order long]."
First: The curve may be more deceptive throwing from 1st, but the rules say they have to be on the mound. Should drop "back"
Second: Need "inning" at the end, or "in the [inning]"

6617
"[%game firstbase]makes the easy pickup..."
No space between "[firstbase]" and "makes"

6630
"and make a perfectly timed "
Should be "and makes a perfectly"

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