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Well, I think it's pretty damn good if you ask me! As always, I wish I could draw images like that...
Anyway, I would say the same thing as Knuckler, more colour contrast would probably be good. Maybe more difference between the two shades of blue you're using, and perhaps some red in the flag.
Personally, I would fatten up the outline of the "Colonials" lettering a bit and make it more white to help that text stand out more. I might also consider enlarging the "C" and tucking in the "olonials" partially inside it. I would also enlarge "Columbia" a little to make it stand out a bit more.
I really like that secondary version. Only it looks a little stretched horizontally, so the "C" in it looks more like a sideways "U" rather than a "C". Maybe shift the soldier to the left a bit so his arm overlaps the "C" so you could then shorten the arms of the "C".
I hope the above doesn't sound too critical, I mean overall it's really great. Mostly I'm just nitpicking... okay, a number of nitpicks, but nitpicks nonetheless...
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