My morning edit became a rewriting session, so sorry for the small delay. Too many things to iron out, too many aspects to cover. Anyway, here is Chapter 23, newly polished and ready to go.
Also, is everyone liking the History of the CBA? Anyone confused about anything? It will ultimately dovetail with Dave's story and provide some context for some of the references in Short Hop.
One more thing: I'm going to do my best to continue posting through the Holidays. I'll be doing some traveling with the family and I'm hoping to have enough chapters "in the can" to avoid any postponements.
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