|
Speaking of the foreword, I spotted a few typos. Hopefully, I've fixed everything.
Following a week or so playing the game, I'm working on an update, which should be ready by Friday.
Thanks everyone for reading this story.
EDIT: Please also note that I'm in the process of editing a few minor things here and there (odd indentation, typos...) and will re-upload the final version of all revised pages. I've already done the first 20 pages or so (beginning of the 2nd chapter).
Last edited by Hankyu Braves; 11-08-2016 at 05:20 AM.
|