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Originally Posted by Poweshow
As usual, I would absolutely love feedback -especially negative feedback- on this logo. The Las Vegas Black Sox are a franchise I use in a ton of my leagues, so here they are:
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Looks pretty good in the game on the home screen... Couple of suggestions you might try and see if you like the results...
1. Apply an additional outer stroke in black... IMO most of the logos (not all of them) look better with a darker outer stroke... I guess this will depend on the background color in the game itself though...
2. Try increasing the font size slightly on city name, seems like a too much blank area around the name to me...
3. Try increasing the width of your grey band that splits the logo and increase the height of the team name...
4. Once again I second Jabez's motion of lightening the shade of grey... Some of the pages in the game the contrast is not as defining as maybe it could be...
These are only suggestions for your consideration... You work is clear and crisp and the logo looks good as it is now... Just a few ideas you might try and see if they give you any better results... Keep'em coming amigo...