In individual scouting reports, the following tweaks might make things read a bit better:
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[88-308] Jake Gardiner is a first liner
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Jake Gardiner is a defenseman, so "first liner" doesn't make as much sense as "first-pair defenseman" or "first-pair d-man".
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[187-396] Gardiner has a very high stamina
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Would read better as "Gardiner has a very high stamina level."
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[77-301] Gardiner has a good vision
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Would read better as "Gardiner has good vision."
Additionally, [187-396], [184-390], [77-301], [88-308], [102-272], [141-350] and [131-339] all are missing periods at the end of their blurbs.