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Old 02-28-2003, 10:04 PM   #2
drprestwood
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a bonus...in the player descriptions, there are some errors...which could be corrected as follows:

"He get's the bat on the ball most of the time."
Should be: gets

"He's only got average speed, but his ability to read pitcher's moves is uncanny."
Should be: pitchers'

"Don't count on any fielding awards at first baseman"
Should be: first base (i assume this type of change is also needed with 2B/3B/OF positions)

"[name] is the kind of guy most manager's would love to stick in the middle of the order."
Should be: managers

"This is a guy fans come to the park just to watch him abuse fastballs."
Should be: i don't know. it's awkward construction above. i know what it's trying to say, but it's not right...perhaps "this is a guy for whom fans come to the park..."
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