seth, just wanted to poke my head in and say that i've enjoyed this thus far.
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Originally Posted by seth70liz76
Brooklyn outfielder Moises Crytser became the first man to hit 2 home runs in a game on August 25. He “circled the bases with such speed, the retrieval of the ball by the outfielders appeared to take place in a fine molasses.”
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particularly enjoyed this line.
the slow pace will be nice, at least for me as the reader, if only because it will allow for the re-reading of certain parts. and lines like the above won't be missed!
i am looking forward to the fall, and not just for v.7; i'm lukewarm on that. but this looks great. keep it up!