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Eugene Church · 03-11-2005, 10:40 AM

#2 is very well done...however I wish you had used the diamonds on it...like you did on #3...but don't overlap the diamonds with the lettering.

#4...if I have the number correct...is the green one with only Choctaws on it...is very well done, too...but it needs Charlotte on in for me...like the city name and nickname to be on a logo...would have liked for you to put Charlotte curved above the Indian figure and use the same font as Choctaws...add the baseballs you put on #5.

#5...if I have the number correct...is the green one with Choctaws slanted across the bottom and Charlotte in the circle...don't care for the slanted Choctaws...would prefer #4 placement of Choctaws...and the font, too...not crazy about the font on this one...you need to widen the circle for Charlotte, so the lettering doesn't touch the black circle...I liked the addition of the baseballs.

#1 needs to be revised like #4 and #5...remove the baseball figure for "O"...prefer the baseballs as in #5.

I would have really liked #4 and #5 with those revisions.

You are going to be a fine logo designer.

03-11-2005, 10:40 AM	#8
Eugene Church Hall Of Famer Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 36,214	#2 is very well done...however I wish you had used the diamonds on it...like you did on #3...but don't overlap the diamonds with the lettering. #4...if I have the number correct...is the green one with only Choctaws on it...is very well done, too...but it needs Charlotte on in for me...like the city name and nickname to be on a logo...would have liked for you to put Charlotte curved above the Indian figure and use the same font as Choctaws...add the baseballs you put on #5. #5...if I have the number correct...is the green one with Choctaws slanted across the bottom and Charlotte in the circle...don't care for the slanted Choctaws...would prefer #4 placement of Choctaws...and the font, too...not crazy about the font on this one...you need to widen the circle for Charlotte, so the lettering doesn't touch the black circle...I liked the addition of the baseballs. #1 needs to be revised like #4 and #5...remove the baseball figure for "O"...prefer the baseballs as in #5. I would have really liked #4 and #5 with those revisions. You are going to be a fine logo designer. Last edited by Eugene Church; 03-11-2005 at 11:46 AM.